4th response

i made a cover sheet for my portfolio and stapled all my assignments together. its all ready for me to hand in on Wednesday.

6th response

today all i have to do is put my portfolio together and turn it in. i got all 3 of them ready to hand in.

5th response

i finished my essay and i got a 4 on it. i didnt get a chance to revise it because i turned it in so late. but i chose to put it in my protfolio along with my instruction and my resume assignments. i chose these 3 assignments to put in my protfolio because i did the best on those and i also think these were the ones i had more fun doing.

3rd resopnse

Today i revised my essay assignment. i haven’t turned it in yet so i read through my rough draft, took out things i thought were not as important. I’m trying to use better vocabulary words for the sentences i have chose. I’m fixing my grammar. and I’m adding more details to the sentences to make the paragraphs more interesting

2nd resopnse

today i handed in my instructions assignment. i had time to revise it in class. i had some spelling errors that i had to fix. i also revised my resume. i just had a couple little errors that i had to change.

1st response

One of the projects i am choosing to put in my porfolio is the Summary Assignment. i felt i did well on it.  im learning how to look out for the main ideas and summarize the proper way.  i think revising my work i have learned to become a better writer.  i know how to look out for my mistakes and im ready to do a whole lot better in my  english 0950  class so that i can only improve my skills more and more.

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