http://bertawillie.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:08:40 +0000 en hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://s2.wp.com/i/buttonw-com.png http://bertawillie.wordpress.com http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/20/4th-response/ http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/20/4th-response/#comments Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:08:40 +0000 bertawillie http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/?p=15 ]]> i made a cover sheet for my portfolio and stapled all my assignments together. its all ready for me to hand in on Wednesday.

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]]> http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/20/5th-response/feed/ 0 bertawillie http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/13/3rd-resopnse/ http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/13/3rd-resopnse/#comments Mon, 13 Apr 2009 17:33:59 +0000 bertawillie http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/?p=9 ]]> Today i revised my essay assignment. i haven’t turned it in yet so i read through my rough draft, took out things i thought were not as important. I’m trying to use better vocabulary words for the sentences i have chose. I’m fixing my grammar. and I’m adding more details to the sentences to make the paragraphs more interesting

]]> http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/13/3rd-resopnse/feed/ 0 bertawillie http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/08/5/ http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/2009/04/08/5/#comments Wed, 08 Apr 2009 17:54:44 +0000 bertawillie http://bertawillie.wordpress.com/?p=5 ]]> today i handed in my instructions assignment. i had time to revise it in class. i had some spelling errors that i had to fix. i also revised my resume. i just had a couple little errors that i had to change.

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